Monday, September 15, 2008

Thesis/Outline RED

Thesis:
While both games are intended to expose immoral corporate practices, the McDonald's game is far more effective.

Outline:
1:Intro to paper
2:Body of the work
  • The visual appearance of the two games.
  • The point of view it takes
  • The actual content each game

How they present factual information about companies

  • The gameplay

3:Closing of argument

How these play into "ethos", "pathos", and "logos."

2 comments:

David Pearlman said...

Your thesis statement is good. Nice outline. Cool that you picked a different game than what everyone else is doing. Good luck on the paper!

DinaRobertsRed said...

In your thesis statement, you should mention some general points about why McDonald's Videogame is more effective than the other, and then expand on these points within your paper.